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the Lovers Story part 1 chapter 1
cathyheart Age 10
Kentucky, United Statesoh, no, i'm late! thought Mary,
she ran down the hall to the door and then the door opened
"sorry lizzy" mary said.
"its okay mary," Lizzy said and lower she said "why do you want me here?"
"oh" Mary said she too speaking no louder than a whisper, "what do i do? i love Jake--but he loves daisey and he doesn't know who i i'm!" | List of Viewer Suggestions7/30/10
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Kentucky, United Statesif you like it you might want to read part 2 chapter 1 bye! :) | 
